TASK 1 :TEXT EXPRESSION & TEXT FORMATTING




TYPOGRAPHY TASK 1: EXERCISE 1&2
4/4/2023 - 2/5/2023/  starting week-ending week
DAVIES ANNIKA ANGELA /0362108
TYPOGRAPHY/BACHELORS OF DESIGN(HONOURS) IN CREATIVE MEDIA 







LECTURES

Week 1:  Mr. Vinod showed us the feed on the Facebook as well as the google feedback sheet . He then gave a briefing on our module booklet and the importance of completing all our work on time . He also gave us the rules of the classroom and what kind of etiquette we should have. We were also shown examples of e portfolios from other students and then we proceeded to create our own. He explained what each section in the e-portfolio is about and how we update it .We also learnt what lines breakers (Enter) are and what forced line breakers(shift + enter) are and how to get them. We also learnt how to insert lines by changing  to HTML view and changing the br in the code to hr. He also showed us how to embed a document and how to make sure the document can be viewed by everyone . He then showed us how to check document is visible  entering the permalink of the post on an incognito page . 

LECTURE 1

TYPOGRAPHY : DEVELOPMENT / TIMELINE

Typeface vs Font 

  • Typeface is the underlying visual design that can exist in many different typesetting technologies 
  • Font is one of these implementations for example there is a typeface named 'Bembo std' and 'Bembo std italic' would be the font 

Early letterform development 

  • The tools they used influenced the appearance of the letterforms as they used wet clay and sharpened  sticks or stones as shown in the image in Fig 1.0

Fig 1.0 4th century B.C.E - Phoenician stele Carthage

 
fig 1.1 evolution of letterforms from Phoenician alphabet to modern Latin and early Arabic


Direction of writing 

  • The Greeks decided to change the direction of writing from right to left (used by Semetic people (people in the middle east) )to a style of writing called 'boustropdedon" where by one reads from right to left then left to right and as this changes the orientation of the letter forms also changed 

fig 1.2 Boustropdedon


Phoecian to Roman

  • Etruscan (Roman carvers) work first by painting  letterforms before inscribing them to avoid making mistakes and wasting stone. 

Qualities of their strokes 
  • a change in weight from vertical to horizontal
  • broadening of the stroke at start and finish   
                                                         
fig 1.3 Late 1st century B.C.E., Augustan inscription in Roman Forum, Rome.


Handscript from 3rd - 10th Century C.E.

Square Capitals 
  • letter form found in Roman monuments 
  • qualities - have serifs added to the finish of main strokes
  • The variety of their stroke width was achieved by the reed pen held at an angle of approximately 60degrees off the perpendicular 
    
fig 1.4 4th or 5th century Square Capitals 

  Rustic capitals
  • compressed version of square capitals using pen at 30degrees off the perpendicular 
  • advantages - allowed for more words on sheet of parchment
                        - took less time to write 
  • disadvantages - slightly harder to write due to compressed nature and more difficult to read
                   
                                                       Fig 1.5 Bamboo reed pen              Fig 1.6 Late 3rd - mid 4th century : Rustic capitals                                                               
        

Roman cursive
  •  used in everyday transactions as it could be written fast
  • This is were the beginning of lowercase letter forms developed
Fig 1.7 4th century Roman cursive

                                                
Uncials 
  •  incorporated some aspects of Roman cursive hand especially in shape of A,D,E,H,M,U and Q. 'Uncia' is Latin for a twelfth of anything this could relate to the small size of the letter forms as there are an 'uncia' of the uppercase letterforms

Fig 1.8 4th- 5th century: Uncials

Half uncials
  • these mark the beginning of lowercase letterforms. They were developed 2000years after the origin of the Phoenician alphabet
  • Qualities - replete with ascenders and descenders
                   
  Fig 1.9 C.500 Half-uncials
                                
Charlemagne, the first unifier of Europe since the Romans issued an eddict in 789 to standardize all ecclesiastical texts. 
  • He entrusted Alcuin of York, Abbot of St Martin of Tours
  • The monks rewrote the texts using both majuscules(uppercase) , miniscule(lowercase), capitalization and punctuation which the standard for calligraphy for a century       
  Fig 2.0 C.925 Caloline miniscule

Blackletter to Gutenberg's type 
  • variations upon Alcuins. 
  • This condensed, strongly vertical letterform known as Blackletter or Textura gained popularity in Northern Europe
  •  In the south , a rounder more open hand gained popularity called 'rotunda'. 
  • The humanistic script in Italy is based on Alcuin's miniscule.
  • Gutenberg skills included engineering, metalsmithing, and chemistry.
  • He used all these skills to build pages that accurately mimicked the work of a scribe's hand. He developed a mechanism where the documenting of information can be done faster by developing small mental matrices that can be put together to form a word and words put together to form sentences like the 42line bible that he created,this saved money and the production of books was less costly and done more efficiently.
                           
           Fig 2.1 C. 1 300: Blackletter (Textura)      Fig 2.2 C.1455: line bible, Johann Gutenberg, Mainz
       
  
       
        fig 2.3 42 line bible by Gutenberg c.1455

SUMMARY OF TYPOGRAPHY DEVELOPMENT TIMELINE

                              
Fig 2.4 Typography Development timeline

Black letter 1450      
  • Earliest printing type, based upon hand copying styles used for books in Northern Europe        
  • examples - Cloister black, Goudy Text            
  • THIS IS GOUDY TEXT

1475 Oldstyle
  • Based upon lowercase forms by Italian humanists’ scholars for book copying and uppercase letterforms found on Roman ruins. Forms evolved away from calligraphic origins over 200 years as they migrated across Europe
  • Bembo, Caslon, Dante, Garamond            
  • THIS IS BEMBO TEXT

1500 Italic       
  • first were close-set and condensed allowing for more words per page, though they were considered their own class of Type, they eventually used to complement roman forms
  •  this is italic

1550 Script      

  • very decorative , not appropriate for lengthy words , range from formal and traditional to causal and contemporary  
  • examples - Mistral, Snell Roundhand 
  •  this is mistral

1750 Transitional       

  • a refinement of oldstyle forms. 
  • Thick to Thin relationships were exaggerated and brackets were lightened
  • examples - Baskerville, Bulmer , Century     
      

1775 Modern  

  • Further rationalisation of oldstyle letterforms.
  • Serifs were unbracketed and contrast between thick and thin strokes were extreme
  • examples - Bell, Bondoni, Caledonia
1825 Square Serif/Sans Serif              
  • originally heavily bracketed serif with little variation between thick and thin strokes.
  • Used in advertising for heavy type in commercial printing as brackets were dropped
  • examples - Clarendon, Memphis, Rockwell

1900 Sans Serif
  • also referred to as grotesque and gothic
  • examples - Meta, News Gothic, Optima 

1990 Serifs/ Sans

  • enlarges the notion of a family of typefaces to include both serif and sans serif alphabets 
  • examples - Scala, Stone ,Rotics                                             
WEEK 2 : introduction to who Mr Vinod is and his background - created type faces and stencils and tried to standardize number plate. 
He showed us Work done by students (type faces created by students) .
Job speed -Why is publishing important 20- 30% higher chances if you have published online 
Fahmi Reza- Malaysian political graphic designer, street artist and documentary filmmaker

LECTURE 2

TYPOGRAPHY TEXT/TRACKING

Kerning: Automatic adjustment of space between letters    
Letterspacing: The addition of space between letters
Tracking: The addition and removal of space in a word or
sentence (Kerning + Letterspacing)

 
    
      Fig 2.5 Kerning and Letterspacing
  •                      

       
Fig 2.7 showing 'step' in font univers 55 normal tracking (top right),tight tracking (bottom left)and loose tracking (bottom right)

  • Designers find it acceptable to letter space uppercase letterforms 
  • It is not encouraged to letter space lowercase letters as the readability reduces

FORMATING TEXT
Tight tracking, normal tracking and Loose tracking
  • It is important to track words appropriately to make sure the readability of the word is good


                                        Fig 2.6 Tight tracking(left) , Normal tracking(middle) , Loose tracking(right)
   
           
          

FLUSH LEFT


- Each line starts at the same place but ends wherever the last word of the text ends. Spaces between texts are consistent allowing the type to create an even gray value.

 

CENTERED TEXT

 assigns equal value and weight as the start and end of each sentence . symmetry is imposed  should be used sparingly with small bodies of text

 

 

FLUSH RIGHT

- where the nd of the line opossed the start and is used in cases like captions for pictures or if there is an axis in the centre of a page

  

JUSTIFIED

- imposes symmetrical shape of text, achieved by expanding or reducing spacing between words can occasionally produce rivers of white space running vertically through text.

   

 


TYPE THAT CALLS ATTENTION TO ITSELF BEFORE THE READER CAN GET TO ACTUAL WORDS IS SIMPLY INTERFERENCE AND SHOULD BE AVOIDED (if you see the type before the words then change the type)


TYPOGRAPHY : Text/Texture

  • Different typefaces suit different messages 
  • Text with generous X height or relatively heavy stroke width produces a darker mass on the page(high gray value)
  • Text with smaller X height or lighter stroke produces lighter mass on the page(low gray value)
  • This is Key to making successful layouts

Fig 2.7 Anatomy of A Typeface
Grayscale
  • Most suitable gray vale would be a middle gray value such as Baskerville shown in fig 2.8

Fig 2.8 Different Typefaces and gray scale values

Leading and Line length

  • Goal - easy, prolonged reading. Field of Type should occupy the page as much as photograph does

Type size: Text type should be large enough to be read easily at arm's length.

Leading: Text that is set too tightly encourages vertical eye movement; a reader can easily lose track. Type that is set too loosely creates striped patterns that cause distraction.

Line Length: determined by gray value Shorter lines require less leading; longer lines more. Keep the line length between 55-65 characters. Extremely short or long line lengths impair reading



                                                               
Fig 2.9 tight leading and short line length (right) and loose leading and long line length(left)


Type specimen book

  • A type specimen book shows samples of typefaces in various different sizes.
  • It is to provide an accurate reference for type, type size, type leading, type line length, etc.
  • Useful to enlarge type to 400% to get a clear sense of the relationship of ascenders on one line and descenders on the other
Fig 3.0 Sample type specimen sheet


Fig 3.1 10 Typefaces used for this module


WEEK 3:
Mr Vinod examined our e portfolios and gave feedback . He also looked at our digitalised words for the Type expression exercise and gave feedback and also gave some tutorials on how to illustrate some of the words.

LECTURE 3

Indicating paragraphs

PILCROW  (¶)

a holdover from medieval manuscripts seldom use today

LINE SPACING

a line space (leading) between lines

12pt leading should have 12pt line spacing as it maintains a good reading rhythm and ensures cross alignment across columns of text

 

STANDARD INDENATION

typically same size as of line spacing of text or same as point size of text

used to save space in newspapers 

Best used in justified text ( never use for left align otherwise there is ragging on both sides of text)

 


                                  
                                  Fig 3.2 use of pilcrow (left)(left)line spacing of 12pts(middle) Standard indentation(right)

  Line spacing and leading

      
     Fig 3.3 Line spacing vs Leading

 Widows and orphans        
  • should never occur in your designs
  • widow- a short line of type left at the end of a column of text
  • orphan- a short line of type left at the start of a new column
  • reducing column width or height is how you avoid it as well as introducing a second line 


Fig 3.4 Widows and Orphans

  • In Justified text widows and orphans are very noticeable and in flush right text ragged left it is more pardonable
  • forced line break 
  • rebreak column to remove this so that last line isn't noticably short
  • kerning can also help reduce this but not more than 3 times or less the 3 times(Tracking must be 5/1000em)
  • make sure that no column of text starts with the last line of the preceding text fixed by reducing line length of column

Highlighting text
  • making text bold 
  • making text italic 
  • changing font of text - make sure to make font size is similar to other font ( from Sans to Sans serif ) reduce by 0.5
  • Reduce aligned  numbers or capital acronyms  by 0.5 to ensure visual cohesion
  • changing colour of text to cyan ,magenta and black
  • Shade box of text best when indentation is used for indicating paragraphs
  • Bullet points(maintaining good reading axis  by aligning bullet points to axis)
  • Quotation marks may be necessary by making it outside of headlines(A prime is not a quote. The prime is for inches and feet. They were later known as ‘dumb quotes’.
    Using them inappropriately as a designer is offensive)
Fig 3.5 San serifs font (univers) reduced by 0.5 to match x height of serif typeface


Creating hierachy of information

A Heads
  •  indicates a clear break  between the topics within a section
                          
B Heads
  • Subordinate to the A head
  • used to show new supporting argument or example for a topic at hand 
  • they should not interrupt text as much as A heads
                        
C Heads
  • followed by an 'em' space for visual separation
  • highlight specific facets of material within B head text. 
  • They don't interrupt the flow of reading


Fig 3.6 A head (left), B head(middle), C head( right)

Cross alignment
  • cross aligning headlines and captions reinforces architectural sense of the page 
  • if using a big font for the captions compared to text double the leading to maintain cross alignment


                                   
    Fig 3.7cross alignment with captions and headlines being different font sizes 


WEEK 4 :
Mr Vinod examined our animations and spot checked a few portfolios and gave a briefing on the next task on text formatting.

LECTURE 4

Typography basic 

Describing letterforms
  • capital letters are wider and have more surface area at the top and that is why the ascender height is greater that it so that there is more balance optical adjustment

      
         Fig 3.8 describing different letterforms


The Font
  • The full font of a typeface contains much more than 26 letters , to numerals and a few punctuation marks 
Fonts have 
  • Uppercase letterforms 
  • lowercase letterforms - Lowercase letters include the same characters as uppercase.
  • small capitals- primaraly found in serif fonts to make even gray value they are the size of x height for acronyms do not use force capitals as it makes strokes thin 
  • uppercase numerals - also known as lining figures . all set to same kerning width succesful ,with tabular material
  • lowercase numerals-also known as old style figures /text figures less common in sans serif than serif , set to x height with ascenders and descenders 
  • italics- small capitals do not have italics 
  • punctuation and miscellaneous characters - can change from typeface to type face make sure they are available in certain typefaces 
  • ornaments - found in traditional or classical typefaces used as flourishes in invitations and certificates (adobe caslon)

Describing typefaces

Fig 3.8 different typefaces


Roman
  • uppercase forms are derived from inscriptions of roman monuments . A slightly lighter stroke is known as book"

Italics
  • named for fifteenth century Italian handwriting on which the forms are based 
oblique-based on roman form of typeface

Boldface
  • Characterized by a thicker stroke than a roman form. It can also be called ‘semi bold’, ‘medium’, ‘black’, ‘extra bold’, or super.

Light
  •  A lighter stroke than the roman form. Even lighter strokes are called ‘thin’.
Condensed 
  • A version of the roman form, and extremely condense styles are often called ‘compressed’.

Extended 
  • An extended variation of a roman font.

Comparing typefaces
  • Ten type faces below represent 500years of type design the goals of the creators of there type faces had two goals easy readability and an appropriate expression of contemporary aesthetics  
  • strong typefaces are simple and be used for various uses 

Fig 3.9 comparing typefaces 

In Fig 3.9 Some of the Rs and As are whismical, awkward, mechanical, harmonous calligraphic


WEEK 5 :

LECTURE 5  
UNDERSTANDING LETTERFORMS 

Fig 4.0  Baskerville A 

  • The uppercase letterforms give the impression of symmetry, although it is not. There are two different Baskerville stroke weights, but what's more noticable is that each bracket joining the serif to the stem has a distinctive arc.
Fig 4.1 Univer's A 

Although the uppercase letterforms appear to be symmetrical, closer inspection reveals that the left slope is narrower than the right stroke. A type designer takes great care to produce letterforms that are both internally unified and individually expressive, as seen in Baskerville (prior) and Univers (Fig. 4.1).

Fig 4.2 Helvetica vs Univers 

The complexity of each individual letterform is neatly demonstrated by examining the lowercase ‘a’ of two seemingly similar sans-serif typefaces—Helvetica and Univers. A comparison of how the stems of the letterforms finish and how the bowls meet the stems quickly reveals the palpable difference in character between the two

Maintaining x height

Fig 4.3 overlapping baseline and median

  • Size of the lowercase letterforms (X-height). Curved strokes, like the letter's' as it has less real estate, must rise above the median (or dive below the baseline) in order to seem to be the same size as the adjacent vertical and horizontal strokes

3. Form / Counterform

Fig 4.4 Form and Counterform

  • The space that the form's strokes describe and frequently contain is known as the counterform (or counter). The spaces between letters are included in the word's counterform when they are combined to form letters. The way the counters are handled affects how nicely the words flow together and how simple it is for us to read what has been established.

Contrast
Fig 4.5 Contrast of different letters 

  • contrast is used in differentiated different information

WEEK 6:
LECTURE 6
SCREEN AND PRINT 

Type for print 
  • paper communication has reduced exponentially 
  • designer needs to make sure that the text is smooth, flowing and pleasant to read good typefaces for print are Caslon, Garamond, Baskerville as they are elegant and intellectual but also highly readable when set at small font size. versatile, easy to digest and neutral which makes typesetting simple

  • Fig 4.6 showing type for print
Type for screen
  • Typefaces are often modified to enhance readability.
  • This is done by increasing x height , reducing ascenders and descenders, using wider letterforms, more open counters, heavier thin strokes and serifs, reduced stroke contrast, as well as modified curves and angles for some designs examples of typefaces badana, georgia.
  • another adjustment is making more open spacing for smaller sizes of text

hyperactive link/hyperlink 
  • A hyperlink is a word, phrase or image that you can click on to jump to a new document or new section within current document  they are normally blue and underlined by default . when you move your arrow over a hyperlink it turns into a hand pointing . hashtags are a form of hyperlinks 
  • good point sizes for screen - 12points/16 pixels

system Fonts for Screen/ Web Safe Fonts
  • Open Sans, Lato, Arial, Helvetica, Times New Roman, Times, Courier New, Courier, Verdana, Georgia, Palatino, Garamond

Static vs motion

static 
  • has minimanal characteristic in expressing words .
  • Traditional characteristics such as bold and italic offer only a fraction of the epressive potential of dynamic properties
  • Typically used in magazines, billboards and posters

motion
  • dramatize Type for letterforms to become fluid and kinetic 
  • used in Film and television production, music videos and advertisements

Fig 4.7  the movie "Seven" (1995) showing title credits(depicting motion typography)by David Fincher, showing motion typography





INSTRUCTIONS




Task 1 :Exercises- Types Expression
 select 4 words and represent each word in a way that conveys their meaning by sketching out ideas that can represent each word well then digitalising it
The words available are 
  • KILL
  • DANCE
  • THROW
  • SPEED
  • BLUR
  • SHATTER 
SKETCHES

Fig 4.8 sketches of throw,speed,dance and kill 17/04/2023

Above are my sketches for each word I included annotations to elaborate more on the idea I'm trying to bring out. I also attempted to do the sketches in the given typefaces that we are allowed to use so that when its easier to envision each idea once I am digitalising them in Adobe illustrator.

My favourite type expressions for kill were kill #1 and kill #5 because I found them to be very unique and simple yet they also have a strong impact when bringing  out the meaning of the word . I also made the 'I' in kill #5 lowercase so that it can look like a person I also gave it an outline look to give the sense the 'person' who has committed suicide felt a sense of  emptiness.

My other favourite designs were Throw #1 , dance #1  and speed #2 .i especially liked dance #1 as it has three factors that express its meaning firstly the baseline of each letter is different to give off that th 'a' and 'c' are jumping which is something that people typically do when dancing at raves to pumped up songs .This difference in baselines also makes the letters form a wave like shape like the wave dance like the arm wave or the stadium wave that spectators do at sports games . The lowercase 'c's look like musical notes to depict music that in turn results in dancing

Fig 4.9 arm wave 


DIGITALISING IDEAS 
         
  
                 Fig 5.0 Digital ideas for word dance 20/04/2023                           Fig 5.1 Digital ideas for Kill 18/04/2023

     
 



 
fig 5.2 digitalised ideas for speed and throw 20/4/2023
 

PROGRESSION
Fig 5.3 progression for Dance 21/4/2023

I used a Bodoni typeface to give it a youthful vibe and I chose to make it lowercase so that there is a good flow from one letter to the next  



                                                         Fig 5.4  progression for Kill 21/4/2023

I made the backround black to give the word a dark feel.  


                         


          Fig 5.5 progression for speed 21/4/2023

I used the alt key and eraser tool to delete the stem of 'E' and dragged it to the left to elongate it to make the streaks of motion. I also put a gradient to show represent the streaks of motion well. I decided on a black background so that the letters appear like light essentially evoking the speed of light.
 

 
  Fig 5.6 Progression for Throw 21/4/2023
This was very simple to do on illustrator .
Fig 5.7 progression for final Kill 21/04/2023
1)I typed out the word but made the I lower case so it can depict a person
2)I elongated the 'i'
3)made the top of the stem more rounded 
4)added a line that connects to the head to show a rope the line was 0.5pts thick





Fig 5.8 initial idea for final Type expressions 18/04/2023

FINAL TYPE EXPRESSIONS


Fig 5.9 Final type expressions 3/5/2023


Fig 6.0 Final Type expressions pdf 3/5/2023 

TASK 2 : TYPE EXPRESSION ANIMATION


Fig 6.1 First attempt at animating the word throw 24/4/2023

I made the T and H of the word spin to show the effect of them being thrown up in the air 
I used 12 frames to make this 
for my next attempt I will try to make the 'O' spin as well and the W go straight up

Fig 6.2 FINAL RESULT of throw animation 25/04/2023

Fig 6.2 16 frame animation 21/04/2023



Mr vinod advised that I make each letter look like its being thrown individually  and to make all the letters spin. I also made the 'O' leave the frame 

TASK 1 : EXERCISE 2 : TEXT FORMATTING

We must design a single final style for Exercise 2 that takes into account many aspects of text formatting, including kerning, leading, paragraph spacing, alignment, etc. We will build and practise our spatial arrangement and information hierarchy skills with this exercise. For this assignment, Adobe InDesign is to be used.

LECTURE 1 :Text Formatting: Kerning and Tracking
              
              

Fig 6.3 Text formatting with kerning and tracking on the left and Text formatting without kerning and tracking on the right 1/5/2023

                
                  fig 6.4 with kerning done (left) and without kerning(right)  



LECTURE 2 - 4
Range of words per line - 55- 65words per line 
Leading 2pts or larger than font size 
Leading used is same as paragraph spacing 
Evenness in text (good gray scale)
Not too much  hyphenation
No widows and orphans 
When using justified 5mm gap should change to 7mm
Right alignment and centered alignment not suitable for a lot of text



fig 6.5 first layout 2/5/2023


Fig 6.6 showing cross alignment 2/5/2023

I liked this layout but I did think the gray value was too high and the image was too big

Font used - Gill sans MT Regular

HEADING
'I am Helvetica' - font size -23pt , kerning done - (-20)
'by John Doe' - font size 19pt done in Gill sans MT Italics 
Leading between 'I am Helvetica' and 'John Doe' - 21pt

BODY OF TEXT 
Font size- 10pt 
Leading - 12pt 
Paragraphs - 12pt 

CROSS ALIGNMENT
done manually by moving text boxes so that text lies on base grid lines 


                

Fig 6.7 layout 2 2/5/2023

I liked this layout as well but i think making all the text in one column made the text look like it was a lot and so it wouldn't be appealing to the reader

HEADLINE
 'I am Helvetica' - font size -43pt , kerning done - (-20)
'by John Doe' - font size 33pt done in Gill sans MT Italics
Leading between 'I am Helvetica' and 'John Doe' - 33pt

BODY OF TEXT 
Font size- 10pt 
Leading - 12pt 
Paragraphs - 12pt 
average Characters per line -60

Margins top 12.7mm, left 12.7 ,right 12.7mm. bottom 50mm
columns 2 
gutter - 5mm


Fig 6.8 layout 3 2/5/2023 


HEADLINE
 'I am Helvetica' - font size -43pt , kerning done - (-20)
'by John Doe' - font size 33pt done in Gill sans MT Italics
Leading between 'I am Helvetica' and 'John Doe' - 33pt

BODY OF TEXT 
Font size- 10pt 
Leading - 12pt 
Paragraphs - 12pt 
average Characters per line -60

Margins top 12.7mm, left 12.7 ,right 12.7mm. bottom 50mm
columns 2 
gutter - 5mm




fig 6.9 Layout 4 (week 5) 2/5/2023



fig 7.0 final layout with grids and guidelines
Final layout format

HEADLINE
 'I am Helvetica' - font size -43pt , kerning done - (-20)
'by John Doe' - font size 33pt done in Gill sans MT Italics
Leading between 'I am Helvetica' and 'John Doe' - 33pt

BODY OF TEXT 
Font size- 10pt 
Leading - 12pt 
Paragraphs - 12pt 
average Characters per line -60

Margins top 12.7mm, left 12.7 ,right 12.7mm. bottom 50mm
columns 2 
gutter - 5mm
 
I also reduced the font size of the acronyms in the text so that there is harmony in the text.








fig 7.0 Final layout  3/5/2023





Fig 7.1 Final layout with guidelines and grids (week 5)3/5/2023



FEEDBACK

WEEk 1
General Feedback : Mr Vinod expressed the importance of further reading  and reading something every week even if its a paragraph or page and document it in the e portfolio and that we shouldn't embed something from power point but rather screen grab and when updating your feedback in the google sheet the latest week should be at the top. He then explained how to embed a document and how to make sure it is made public and he also showed us how to check that the document is public by copying the permalink of the post and searching for it in an incognito tab. Mr Vinod also advised that after each update we check that it is visible in the browser and he told us to label each post. He also encouraged to unpublish and then edit it and not to customize the eportfolio for the first 5 weeks.  Mr vinod advised us to make sure we put labels on each post . He also elaborated on the importance of labelling each image as well as describing and dating it. He advised that we number the images before we submit to avoid numbering wrong  and that our final work should be screengrabbed and should be jpeg

WEEK 2

Specific Feedback :more shattering for the word shatter 
reduce amount of distortion in the word melt
give perspective and more shake to the dance  to show movement

General Feedback : keep the format of typeface and reduce distortion of certain words especially "melt"
make sure each word is readable 
be prudent in use of melt droplets and limit graphical elements 
If graphical elements are used make them grey so they do not take away from concept being shown 
create contrast in ideas as it pronounces the idea more 
thickness of line strokes to show some sort of motion should a thickness of 0.5mm
come up with distinct ideas rather than the same concept in different forms 
use appropriate typeface for what you want to portray
4 questions to ask yourself 

  1. are the explorations sufficient
  2. Does the expression match the meaning of the word 
  3. On a scale of 1-5 , how strong is the idea 
  4. How can the work be improved 

WEEK 3
general Feedback: Reduce graphical elements. Place words well in each box.

specific Feedback:designs were good just need to add an element of impact in composition. Label and date each picture in e portfolio. update lectures in e portfolio. make font size 7 pts for font labels. use ITc font type


WEEK 4
general feedback: for smooth animation use 25 frames per second
specific feedback: Good animation for 'throw' but make letters go out of the frame or return back to the bottom

WEEK 5
general feedback: if justified make sure zero formatting has been done before hand
reduce rivers by introducing hyphenation Do not make entire body of text bold use black and white images only
reduce point size of capitals in acronyms
Specific feedback:

Questions to ask yourself
1.Is Kerning and tracking appropriately done?
2.Does the font size correspond to the line-length,leading & paragraph spacing
3.Is the alignment choice conducive to reading?
4.Has the ragging been controlled well?
5.Has cross-alignment been established using base-grids?
6.Are widows and orphans present?

WEEK 6
general feedback: use of bodoni is a bad idea for large amounts of text . Do not use different line lengths throughout your text focus on one thing at a time instead of trying to multitask

specific feedback: Line length is too long ,improve on layout






REFLECTIONS


Experience: setting up e portfolio was fairly simple. Updating consistently required a
lot of effort but it helped a lot as I did not need to catch up much. Sketching was interesting and it allowed me to be really visualize my ideas .Writing the lecture notes were a struggle as some were quite long but watching the lecture videos at 1.5x speed helped as well as taking breaks after every 15mins.Learning about the development of letterforms was quite intriguing and discovering certain information about certain characters that I was using wrongly (quotes and primes). Formatting the layout of my e-portfolio was difficult as first but eventually i got the hang of it. Using Adobe Illustrator for the first time was quite laborious I still need to develop my technical skills a bit more by watching more tutorials on the creative cloud. Animating was fairly easy and I enjoyed seeing the breakdown of it all as I have always been fascinated by animation. Picking a good layout for Exercise 2 was okay Mr. Vinod did gave really good feedback and I liked the final outcome. Overally it was an interesting and educational experience though they were several times where I almost had mental breakdowns 

Observations:
I noticed i enjoy being challenged to be creative while being given strict limitations especially with the type expression exercise . I also realized that 'simplicity is the the ultimate sophistication'-Leonardo da Vinci in the type expression exercise especially with the my final selection for the words throw, dance and Kill. I managed to portray the meanings of each word with minimal effort .I also learned that researching on each task before beginning is imperative to producing impactful and meaningful work basically using Semantics (something I learned in my further reading). I observed that i need to improve on my discipline and time management skills as sometimes i do end up doing things in a rush due to deadlines and my work suffers because of it . I also got to use my skills that i learnt in my Illustrative and visual narrative class as well as my digital imaging and photography class as when i was compiling all my sketches and progression I used Adobe photoshop which was something I found to be very useful which resulted in my work being more tidy and presentable


Findings: In conclusion the tasks I had to complete here really tested my creative abilities and brought to light some of my shortcoming in terms of my technical abilities which I will improve on my watching tutorials online and learning certain shortcut keys to allow me to work faster. I learned a lot about the presentation of text and when to use appropriate fonts and typefaces for certain projects . I also got to appreciate letterspacing and kerning so much more as now whenever I see certain logos or posters I start to say stuff like "they could've kerned that word a bit more" which is something I thought I would never say





FURTHER READING

SEMATICS
Fig 7.2 The Vignelli canon by Massimo Vignelli 6/4/2023


Fig 7.3

I found this really interesting because for most of my life I thought good underlining was like the one on the left 

fig 7.4 visual power 12/4/2023

Difference of  scale within the same page can give a lot of impact. Difference Typeface can create a visually dynamic impression as shown above in fig 0.0. I will attempt to use this in my tasks to create impactful designs especially in the Type expression exercise to draw appropriate attention to my work.

fig 7.5 discipline 19/4/2023
This is quite an integral aspect of design as it ultimately determines the consistency in whether or not good work is produced over a period of time. This also determines the quality of work produced.

fig 7.6 Sematics 24/4/2023
Relatability and meaning of design is an essential part of developing good meaningful work. Sufficient research is required for this 


Fig 7.7 A type primer by John kane

Fig 7.8 describing letterforms 

this helped me solidify my knowlege on describing letterforms 
Fig 7.9 IDEAS by David Creamer 2003


Fig 8.0 Dingbats

This was a really cool read as it felt like I was learning about the early kinds of emojis.These can add a whole layer meaning to a text without using actual words and they can be used to convey cultural and social references which can be quite intriguing.


Fig 8.1 Typographic design: Form and communication 2015
 

Fig 8.2 Optical relationship within a font

the optical relationship within a font is about harmony and balance. It is a delicate interplay between design elements that must ensure the legibiltiy and aesthetic appeal of a typefaceand when done skillfully,it can turn an ordinary font into a work of art, making reading a more enjoyable experience 




















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